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Monday, May 10, 2010

Oil Spill Reflective Paragraph Assignment

Instructions:
Please read the following story on the Oil Spill on the Gulf of Mexico.
Follow the Interactive Map to see the Spread of the Oil Spill.

http://www.freetech4teachers.com/2010/05/tracking-oil-spill-interactive-maps.html?utm_source=feedburner&utm_medium=email&utm_campaign=Feed%3A+freetech4teachers%2FcGEY+%28Free+Technology+for+Teachers%29

1.  Post a Comment on MY Blogger:
You will complete a Reflective Summary.
Requirements:
*One to Two Paragraphs in Length
~Include your thoughts, ideas, feelings, reactions, etc.
~Include your Name and Title and Please write in Complete Sentences and Your comments MUST be appropriate and About The Topic ONLY!
*Please also check your Grammar and Spelling before you Post!
(I recommend that you use the Buddy Proof Read System before you Post)


2.  You must also comment on ONE of your Classmates Post to this Discussion.
~Include your Name and please write in Complete Sentences and Your comments MUST be appropriate and About The Topic ONLY!

48 comments:

  1. ---Breon---reflective summary--I never knew a ship had that much oil. But I think some of the animals died from that oil spill because when the oil gets on there bodies it can soak through there skin and go into there respiratory system. I wonder what happened to ship to cause that oil spill.

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  2. Reflective Summary: As many as 210,000 gallons of oil spill have polluted the Gulf of Mexico. The spill followed a blowout that caused an explosion on the deepwater horizon offshore drilling rig, which then sank off the coast of Louisiana. Eleven rig workers are missing and presumed dead; the explosion also injured 17 others. The oil spill covers at least 2,500 square miles, which isn’t good.


    Sydnie Danielle Barrs

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  3. Jovanny lopez

    5-10-10

    Mrs. Martinez

    Gulf of Mexico oil spill

    The oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico has almost polluted the whole entire Gulf of Mexico. It was about 210,000 gallons of oil that almost covered most of the Gulf, this may pollute the whole gulf and could endanger all the animals that live in the habitat. This oil spill i think that it is one of the worst oil spills that i have heard of, it makes me think that if many people that carry oil across sea and they spill it it could affect the whole entire world!

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  4. Reflective Summary-Arbreon Thompson-I Wonder what made the ship crash and spill the oil. I think that the oil will kill some of the animals in the gulf,I also think it will effect people because they will fish in the gulf and they might get a fish that has swam through the oil.

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  5. @ Breon,
    Other ships can carry much more oil than what that ship was carrying. Of course it killed animals because that much oil effected the whole enviroment.
    By: Jovanny Lopez

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  6. Melissa Rosales
    Oil spill reflective paragraph

    I believe that because of the oil spill we will have many problems such as dying animals, polluted water, and ect. The oil spill has also wasted the oil that we need for gas and such other things. Because of the oil spill our animals could start to mutate. It is weird but many species could become poisonous. I believe that the oil spill has caused many problems so far and will continue to cause even more.

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  7. Francisco Grimaldo Reflective summary Gulf of Mexico oil spill

    I think that the oil spill is very bad for the environment. It not only pollutes but it also kills many sea animals. And it also kills animals that eat sea animals. So it hearts lots of animals. Which we eat so then we get sick.

    And then we die and it’s all because of an oil spill. And I also think the oil spill is bad because petroleum is hard to get and we cannot be so irresponsible to let things like this happen. We need to be more careful and protect our oil.

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  8. @ Melissa

    I agree with you because the animals and water will be effected by the oil spill.

    Arbreon Thompson

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  9. Jimmy Deleon Reflective Summary on the oil spill
    The oil spill on the Gulf of Mexico has polluted a lot of the water there. It's spills 210,000 gallons daily since it started which was on April 20. I think it really is bad because many animals are getting affected by it. It’s also polluting a lot of things. Over all this whole issue is horrible and is affecting the earth severely.

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  10. @ Melissa
    God job I liked this summarry bacause it inspired to think more about nature. It is very intresting and important.

    By:Francisco Grimaldo

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  11. Reflective Summary
    Jazmynne Williams
    Since the oil rig explosion, oil has seeped out closer than scientists expected. On April twentieth, there was an oil rig explosion in the Gulf of Mexico. Days passed and the oil leak spread more than scientists thought. On April twenty-fourth, their robotic monitor devices saw that the well was leaking in two places. They worked their hardest to shut off the well, and they were unable to. The spill eventually was ten times bigger than scientists estimated.
    I think that if they can’t stop it, then it’s going to be a big problem. It’s going to affect the animals living in the Gulf. People can’t eat the fish because they’re contaminated. It wouldn’t be possible to stop everyone from fishing for profit, though.

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  12. matthew j riley reflective summary may10,2010

    i have the same thoughts as grimaldo he is right and i strongly agree with him

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  13. Chandler Smith

    5-10-10

    Mrs. Martinez

    Gulf of Mexico

    The oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico; will probably make it really dangerous, not just for the fish but, also for the humans in the area; Like in South Padre Island TX,there is no doubt that they are smelling the oil; Which burns your nostril hair,and damages your brain cells and for anybody that tries to swim in the Gulf of Mexico

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  14. Replying to jovannys
    i really agree with jovanny lopez because what my summary says its similiar to his.

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  15. ** REFLECTED SUMMERY

    I think that the oil spill is bad because we only have a limited amount of oil and all that oils just going to waste and this really suck because I’m going to the cost this summer and I really don’t want to swim in oil. And all the animals are dying for no reason and I want to animals without oil on them.

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  16. Marcus Mesta Reflective Summary

    The oil spill is doing badly to the environment. Its killing all of the fish and all the rest of the animals in it. It has polluted a large space of water and the animals in the water are taking it in so when we eat them we can get really sick. And we lose petroleum and it is hard to get that so we need to be more careful with that kind of stuff.

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  17. @ Sydnie
    The oil was leaking from two different places, which explains why so much oil was leaking.

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  18. Reflective Summary

    The Oil Spill around the Gulf Of Mexico, went close to the Mississippi Delta (a part of land).
    Six days later the oil spill started to leak 5 times faster, and Deeper. Heavy winds drive the spreading oil spill closer to the Louisiana coast. The spill washes into fragile wetlands and made the lands around rough and rigged. President Obama visits and calls the spill a “potentially unprecedented environmental disaster.” Weather predictors and announcers say that the weather will hold of the oil spill to get on the land and kill the enviroment for several more days. The oil spill covers at least 3,000 to 4,000 square miles.

    Mousa Otri
    5-10-10

    Gulf Of Mexico Oil Spill

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  19. Daniel Ramirez Reflective Summary

    What is going on is that the oil spill is moving east of the Gulf of Mexico. It might reach the tip of Venice and get impacted by the oil. It impacted Chandelier Island. My conclusion is that it might keep spreading and it will kill most of our fish and sharks. There were about 210,000 gallons of oil that were spilled per day and has polluted the Gulf of Mexico.
    I fell that its not good for our environment we are already killing it with our factories polluting our skies.

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  20. Kenneth Garza Reflective Summary

    The oil spill has affected the ocean and the animals that live in it a lot. I think it’s sad and that people should be more careful. The environment was home to many living organisms. 210,000 gallons everyday is a lot, and has affected the Gulf of Mexico greatly. It’s killing a lot of animals and affecting the way that they survive. I think its hurting the natural world, and people need to start helping out to clean up and make sure it doesn’t happen again.

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  21. Oil Spill in the Gulf of Mexico
    There have been a lot of oil spills. One of them happened in the Gulf of Mexico. This oil spill has affected a lot of animals that live in the oceans. It destroys their habitats and it makes it harder for them to breath. Then most of the fish and other sea creatures start to die. So it makes it even more difficult for other animals to find food. So then they start to die and it takes a long time to find other habitats. It kills the reefs and plants start to die too.
    All these organisms need to find other places to live. They depend on other animals to get food. Like turtles, they have mobile homes; but if they don’t get the food they need they die. The predator that eats the turtle will die too. This occurs because of the loss of animals. Everyone in this ecosystem relies on other animals. People need to start thinking of a better way to fix this. Do they not realize that what they are doing is wrong? Hurting sea creatures and also land creatures. The water oil that has been running off to an island can cause death to land creatures.
    By: Arely Sanchez
    5/10/10

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  22. OIL SPILL IN GULF OF MEXICO


    An explosion and fire on a drilling rig on April 20 left 11 workers missing and presumed dead. The rig sank two days later about 50 miles off the Louisiana coast. I think this is going to be really bad because this oil spill is going to disrupt the natural food cycle for all species of fish. The species rely on another species so it going to kill a lot of fish. All plans of getting this fixed has been so far unsuccessful. The president has been notified. This is the worst oil spill in the United States. What I personally think is that now the public is unsafe to swim in it. Were losing money fast and this is a pretty serious problem. Also we need to find a solution fast.

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  23. Fernando Serrano 5/10/10
    Reflective summary
    I didn’t know that an oil rig had exploded. It is the first I ever herd of this
    I think the oil spill is going to affect the effect the habitat of the fish and some of them might die. It will not only effect the fish it will also harm people, oil kills your brain cells and it burns your hair.

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  24. @ arely sanchez.
    I think you get a great perspective over all. how ever you are missing some facts on it.

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  25. @Nathan
    Great details! I want to do something to help.

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  26. Good Morning Students:
    I am reading some good Reflections. I encourage your to continue to research this oil spill and make connections to your own Environmental Issues Project Topic Idea.

    Question: What impact do you think this oil spill will have on the American economy? Do you think there is a need for Environmental Laws to prevent spills such as this one from happening?

    Bonus: Get 10 BONUS POINTS if you post a reply to this question on this discussion thread!

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  27. Rodolfo Llamas 5-10-10

    I think the oil spill is bad for the environment. I think that because it can kill the fish from all the chemicals in the water. I think that they everyone needs to help stop it because it can be dangerous. They need to do something now because people aren’t really able to fish anymore. If nothing is done now then the oil spill can cover the Gulf of Mexico. That’s what I think about the oil spill.

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  28. Ariel Ballard
    Reflective Summary
    My reaction about the oil spill is what are they going to do to clean up the mess?
    And if the oil spill takes months or years to clean up it the oil spreads then aquatic species would be depleted. And my thing about the ship is why would they let a ship carry oil if they know if anything happens to the ship it could cause an oil spill?

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  29. @ Francisco Grimaldo

    I agree with you because oil spills are bad for the environment. And your are smart.

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  30. I think that the oil is going to cover the Gulf of Mexico. The oil spill is bad because it is kills the fish and the oil spill are over the fish homes.That can be bad for us and for the fish.There was 115 people in the explosion.

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  31. Reflective Summary Montenea Turner

    I think the oil spill is bad because it affects a lot of life in the ocean. It pollutes the water and kills a lot of life in the water and it takes a lot to clean up the mess. There have been a lot of days that have passed and the oil is spreading even more.
    This makes the job even more harder to clean up. I think that they need to do is clean it up as soon as possible so it wont effect anything else.

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  32. Kamri Blaylock

    Reflective summary!

    I think that the oil spill has expanded over the Gulf of Mexico. It affects the living things in the ocean. It is polluting the water which decreases the lives in the ocean!

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  33. REFLECTIVE SUMMARY-
    BY
    LARAYSHA McCORMICK

    I think that the oil spill will kill lots of animals. I wonder what happened or what made the ship crash. 42 thousand gallons a day is leaking from the wellhead. The oil spill can also effect the people because the oil will effect the fish and someone might go fishing and end up getting a fish that’s sick because of the oil. This could take months or years just to clean it up.

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  34. Clarissa Ramirez May 10,2010


    Reflective Summary
    I feel sorry for the animals that live in the Gulf of Mexico. Hearing that the Oil Spill destroyed many animal lives, made me sad. This also destroyed our population of fish in the Gulf of Mexico. Now what will they do to help fresh sea water to maintain.
    “Let’s hope that the Government will do something about this”. Animals will and can continue swimming in these conditions after it has been dis-contaminated (or if it ever does). I LOVE fish and shrimp so we should do a big deed and be a big part of helping to clean the water.

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  35. Brenda Morales

    ~*the oil spill*~
    There was an oil spill on Gulf of Mexico and near Mississippi river. That’s a very bad thing because I killed a lot of fishes. And it can be bad for us because I can affect our water. And it also caused an explosion.

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  36. @Kamri,
    i agree with you i too think that the oil spill; will kill the animals

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  37. Reflective summary
    By Nehemiah Cyphers

    Through out the days and months from April 22 through May 10, the oil spill is increasing.
    as Each day passes by, the oil spill gets worse and starts to spread across the gulf of Mexico.
    The spill went from north, south, east, and west.
    The spills transform from little puddles, to huge amounts. They recorded about 210,000 gallons of oil during the accident. The water population is terrible, and the animals in the sea are dying. The u.s needs to be participating in this matter so we could save our environment.

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  38. Monce B. May10,2010

    Reflective summary

    I feel really bad about the oil spill that happened in the Gulf of Mexico. I was informed that a lot of animals died because of this oil spill.
    I also know that the government of Mexico is trying to find out ways to help the animals without harming them, because they already lost a lot of fish and aquatic animals that live in the Gulf of Mexico. And I also think that how the government is helping is doing a lot of good towards the fish population. sincerly, monce

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  39. Alejandra Maldonado

    The Oil Spill
    It happened near the Mississippi river.
    On April 20, 2010. Its a very bad thing because is affecting all living things under the water. Its also polluting the water.

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  40. Ryan Silva
    Reflective summary on the Gulf of Mexico oil spill.
    I think that if we don’t contain the oil quickly it will spread and the sea life will be affected. This may also be bad for humans because we probably really needed that oil for ourselves.

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  41. By: Jordan Gosey
    Reflective Summary
    I think every day the oil spill is getting larger. Since April 22nd thru May 10th it’s polluting the water which makes things die. So I think the U.S. needs to help clean the water by putting a chemical in the water to cleanse the water so they have a better environment.

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  42. Reflective summary
    By Nehemiah Cyphers

    Through out the days and months from April 22 through May 10, the oil spill is increasing.
    as Each day passes by, the oil spill gets worse and starts to spread across the gulf of Mexico.
    The spill went from north, south, east, and west.
    The spills transform from little puddles, to huge amounts. They recorded about 210,000 gallons of oil during the accident. The water population is terrible, and the animals in the sea are dying. The u.s needs to be participating in this matter so we could save our environment.

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  43. ROCIO VELAZQUEZ
    *THE OIL SPILL*
    The oil spill started on April 20, 2010 and it is still going on affecting the rivers and the all in the coast of Mexico. This is causing for many animals to die because of the pollution the oil is causing on the water, animals are drinking that water and dyeing every second that they drink it. People are getting also affected because they cannot drink from that water. Or do anything because they will get sick.

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  44. ROCIO VELAZQUEZ
    *THE OIL SPILL*
    The oil spill started on April 20, 2010 and it is still going on affecting the rivers and the all in the coast of Mexico. This is causing for many animals to die because of the pollution the oil is causing on the water, animals are drinking that water and dyeing every second that they drink it. People are getting also affected because they cannot drink from that water. Or do anything because they will get sick.

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  45. Jacob Briones
    Reflective summary
    On April 20, 2010 there was an oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico. They have recorded about 210,000 gallons of oil spilling out into the ocean each day. Many local fisherman have been trying to help get rid of the oil so that many of the fish and ousters and all types of sea animals will not die so they can keep there jobs and business from going down hill.

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  46. @ Clarissa,

    Impressive Post! That is what a Reflective Post should look like. Thank you for using quotations when quoting someone elses words. What do you think we can do to help in these efforts?

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